Friday, January 31, 2014

Snowblind

By: James B. Davis

       “I'm Michael, and this is Tommy.” I said to the old man “Where you youngsters heading?” He said “Out to the old Granite house, the people there are our grandparents, right Tommy?” “Right.” he said, while staring into oblivion (Tommy was blind), “That's quite a walk, especially in the winter, y'all need a lift, I be happy to give you one.” said the old man “Thanks, but we'd rather walk. Thanks for the offer though.” I said then walked away “You guys be careful.” he yelled as we were leaving his site, so we just waved good by.

So we set off, walking through the woods. So we walked and walked, for hours. Walking through forest, field, we even walked through a marsh, then just more woods. After many miles of walking, it started getting dark, so we pitched up camp under an oak tree. The minute Tommy got in the tent he was asleep, but I didn't sleep. All night I tossed and turned, listening to nocturnal animals run and play outside the tent. It was about dawn, and I heard a screaming, no a screeching, and a large shadow moved outside the tent. I froze from it and my heart pounded, I sat all morning with my pocket knife in my hand, until Tommy woke up, which was probably around 10:00 am. “Michael?” he said while reaching around “I'm hear, don't worry.” I said and he grabbed my wrist. He pulled himself up with my arm. “How did you sleep?” he said, I sighed “Fine.” We both got out of the tent and I gasped, “What's wrong?” said Tommy, “Nothing, I-I stubbed my toe.” that was what I said, but it wasn't the truth, the snow was pink with blood, and a deer hung in the tree with it's innards ripped out. I just told Tommy to sit while I took down the tent, then we went up the path.

All day I was looking around for bears, what else could kill a deer and hang it in a tree like that. The cliff was the scariest, which was the next path. I had to have Tommy right next to me, Tommy was always singing something, or humming a song, most of the time Black Sabbath or The Beatles, the hole time on the cliff he we was singing, he sang a whole album by The Beatles, don't know which one though, it was the one with Strawberry Fields in it, which ever one that is. So we walked along the cliff for like an hour, which was terrifying, cause Tommy could have fallen at any time.

We took a brake once we got off the cliff. We ate lunch and I heard the screeching again. I saw Tommy walking away into the woods, and a bear stood right in front of him. I slowly walked toward him, and grabbed his wrist, “Michael?” he said “Shush!” I said “Walk back, slowly.” Tommy then tripped and we ran down toward the cliff, I had to keep Tommy away from the edge, so I pushed him toward the rocks on the side. The bear was nowhere in sight, so we stopped to take our breath. We camped on the cliff, and I didn't sleep that night either, cause all night I heard things outside, scratching, hissing, and growling. It was probably about 3:00 am, when I heard the bear again, but I sounded scared, and what in god's name scares a bear. I heard the screeching again. The Bear roared in pain, I looked out the window, and saw a tall human- like figure, it stood at least eight feet tall, the head on it was huge, with a mouth, two feet wide and full of razor sharp teeth, it had claws at least six inches long, it was mostly humanoid but it had a tail, and wings unfolded from behind it's back, and it jumped right off the cliff, and then flew away, I then leaned back in the tent. And slowly fell asleep.


I was woken by Tommy screaming. He had three long cuts on his face, the same as ones on the tent, I looked out side, a long trail of blood was going down the cliff, I told Tommy that he needed to stay in the tent, I went outside, and took my pocket knife, pulled out all three blades, and tied it to a five foot stick. I raced down the cliff with my spear, I also tapped three sharp rocks to my hand. I got to the bottom, which was a thick forest, full of small animals. I looked around for the thing, then I noticed, all the animals were running in my direction, mice, frogs, bugs, all at my feet, the birds were flying in swarms above my head, then I looked in front of me, an entire herd of deer in a stampede right in front of me. I didn't have much time to think, I hind behind a tree as the deer ran around me on all sides. The animals were gone, not one fly was left in the area. I heard a crunching sound behind me, then another, and another. I could hear it breathing, I could almost feel it. The thing's hands grabbed my side of tree, I clinched my hand, and turned around, and punched the things hands, stabbing it. The creature screamed in pain, it lifted the tree right out of ground and threw it twenty feet through the air. “Shit” I ran with it following right behind me, I ran and ran and ran. I tripped on a big root and turned around to my back, I put the spear in the air. The creature stuck into the spear, I smashed the creature's face with the rocks on my hand. It went limp, I crawled from under it, panting. The thing slowly got back up behind me and grabbed my head and lifted me into the air, it turn me toward itself. The creature let out a chuckle and opened up it monstrous mouth. Three mouthed tongues came out of it's horrid maw, two of them rapped around my neck while the other just sat in front of my face, just sitting there then looked me right in the eye and opened it's mouth, I grabbed it and tore it out of the monsters mouth, the creature dropped me as blood sprayed out of it's mouth, monstrous torrents of it, and blood cover the whole area. The creature hit the ground hard, and smashed it's head on a rock, basically exploding it.



I ran up the cliff, hoping Tommy was alright. I ran and ran, nearly killing myself in the process. By the time I got there it was dusk, Tommy was still in the tent, asleep, well least that's what it seemed like. I rolled him over only to reveal a half skeletal Tommy with flesh hanging from his bones and blood covering his clothes. Tears overcame my eyes, I couldn't even see. I then looked up to see a shadow looking over the tent, I then heard a growl like mix between a bear and a wolf. The tent ripped open, I really wish I would have taken the old man's offer, I ran out of the tent the creature followed, I jumped down off the cliff, I thought for sure I was done for, then I noticed a that I was going straight for a giant lake. When I hit the water I screamed, the pain was terrible, so I swam up to the top. I crawled up onto the shore, and walked away into the woods...  

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